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Posted on Wed, Jul 27, 2005 13:59

Today I told you I loved you.
You didn't feel the same.
You acted flattered and proud,
but left me broken and lame.
I told you I loved you-
the first boy I've told.
My heart is aching now
and I feel so very old.
Alone in my room I sit,
dreaming of your face.
I can't help feelling sick,
I'm losing this pathetic race.
My heart is pounding
as it breaks in two.
Tears roll down my face
as I think of you.
My hands shake
as I become unglued.
You don't love me
but I will always love you.



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Posted on Sun, Aug 27, 2006 23:16

Great poem Jessica.



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Posted on Fri, Aug 18, 2006 12:11

That was a beautiful poem! Thank you for sharing it with us!!!



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Posted on Mon, Apr 10, 2006 17:06

thank you jessica...
that was beautiful....
sending you big hugs...



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Posted on Thu, Sep 01, 2005 14:26

Those lines are so full of sadness; I hope you get feeling better. I do admire you though because you felt an emotion and weren't afraid to express it. Maybe if more of us were as brave as you then there might be much more happiness and fufillment in the world. Please don't ever change though; honesty, directness, and love are a few qualities that we could all embrace.



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Posted on Thu, Sep 01, 2005 11:04

Lovely poem JessicaLuv



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Posted on Wed, Aug 31, 2005 10:44

Dang Scoot! I just checked out your profile. I wish you lived closer to me!!

  


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Posted on Tue, Aug 30, 2005 17:40

Great poem. I can completley understand how you felt, I have been there myself. Don't ever give up, there is someone out there for everyone it just takes time finding them.

  
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Posted on Thu, Aug 18, 2005 07:35

aww that poem was really good, yeah i so know how u feel there!!!!



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Posted on Fri, Aug 05, 2005 03:58

Nice poem a little long for me but very nice. Ps is this your first poem you wrote.



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Posted on Thu, Aug 04, 2005 13:44


Rainnestorm write:
PS-Scoot you get hotter with each picture!


Thank you!.. I am good a Photoshop.. Kidding.
Thank you very much. you are very attractive too.



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Posted on Fri, Jul 29, 2005 07:14

Jessica,
Heart touching poem...you have a talent..stay with it!
It hurts for a bit..and then it heals...honestly HUGS



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Posted on Fri, Jul 29, 2005 00:12

"hi have always been a lover of big beautiful women , i would love to have one of any race to be my girl friend and hopefully my wife. I'm 34, Heavy-set brown hair, green eyes with glasses. I'm disabled & Diabetic enjoy movies, going out, long walks, cuddling with that special someone. if your the big beautiful women that looks at the inner person Loves To give long massages

  


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Posted on Wed, Jul 27, 2005 22:00

I know how that feels. Very nice!

  


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Posted on Wed, Jul 27, 2005 19:20

That was a true heartfelt expression after being rejected by the one you are in love with. Can you try another version using past tense and different wording? It might make it more emotional. You are beautiful by the way

  


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Posted on Wed, Jul 27, 2005 18:07

Ok... am I missing something because I don't see what Jessica wrote



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Posted on Wed, Jul 27, 2005 12:21

That was beautiful, Jessica......and very sad.



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Posted on Wed, Jul 27, 2005 08:07

That is so sad. I want to cry. It is very good. Hopefully one day you can't write one the exactly opposite and it would probably make me cry too. Great writing.


PS-Scoot you get hotter with each picture!

  


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Posted on Wed, Jul 27, 2005 04:09

Very nice....!

  


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