Today I told you I loved you.
You didn't feel the same.
You acted flattered and proud,
but left me broken and lame.
I told you I loved you-
the first boy I've told.
My heart is aching now
and I feel so very old.
Alone in my room I sit,
dreaming of your face.
I can't help feelling sick,
I'm losing this pathetic race.
My heart is pounding
as it breaks in two.
Tears roll down my face
as I think of you.
My hands shake
as I become unglued.
You don't love me
but I will always love you.
Those lines are so full of sadness; I hope you get feeling better. I do admire you though because you felt an emotion and weren't afraid to express it. Maybe if more of us were as brave as you then there might be much more happiness and fufillment in the world. Please don't ever change though; honesty, directness, and love are a few qualities that we could all embrace.
Great poem. I can completley understand how you felt, I have been there myself. Don't ever give up, there is someone out there for everyone it just takes time finding them.
"hi have always been a lover of big beautiful women , i would love to have one of any race to be my girl friend and hopefully my wife. I'm 34, Heavy-set brown hair, green eyes with glasses. I'm disabled & Diabetic enjoy movies, going out, long walks, cuddling with that special someone. if your the big beautiful women that looks at the inner person Loves To give long massages
That was a true heartfelt expression after being rejected by the one you are in love with. Can you try another version using past tense and different wording? It might make it more emotional. You are beautiful by the way
That is so sad. I want to cry. It is very good. Hopefully one day you can't write one the exactly opposite and it would probably make me cry too. Great writing.
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